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Montayva13

Young Blood
ok, so I have been a little reluctant to post anything here on the lair, seeing as I feel my story really lacks in some departments concerning Yautja. So many of my friends shudder when I mention that I've 'started a new fanfic'...

But, if there is anyone else out there as weirdly like minded as me, and doesn't mind reading crudely constructed and horribly inaccurate (ok, so I may be exaggerating slightly) fanfics, then I'll just drop the link for my latest one here.

BTW, anyone who doesn't like the idea of Predators working with humans... dont bother reading >.< Pretty much what mine is about. Also, people who don't like the 'Predators' movie, then this probably won't be your cup of tea either, its set some time (many many years) after that. Oh, and one more thing... anyone who doesn't like the idea of Predator/human relations, well, turn away now coz there's plenty of that too.


Feel free to leave any feedback, its always appreciated, even when its constructive, it helps me improve my writing :) Keep in mind, this is something that was totally off the top pf my head, and may not be accurate as far as what already exists concerning Yautja history...

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9868246/1/Scourge-of-the-Outcast
 

Zentha 1

Unblooded
Ok ch. 5 down still reading  I promise if you leave this on a cliff hanger I..I dont know what I will do...maybe rage out on Dynasty Warrior's.
 

Montayva13

Young Blood
I love building up to suspenseful moments throughout my stories. :) I will warn you, I haven't finished writing this story yet, so if it happens to leave off at a suspenseful time before manage to update it, I'm terribly sorry! Usually I can get a chapter or two out each day though, so it's never long between updates
 

Zentha 1

Unblooded
Ch.9 still going strong  I love how you pay attention to little things like the way the predator moves...I cant quite put my finger on it but I like when someone pays attention to how they move the mandibles ^-^ its little gestures like that  >-
 

Montayva13

Young Blood
Thanks :)

I've taken a bit of a break over Christmas, but getting back into writing it now, so more updates should be coming soon :) editing just takes me so damn long!
 
Wow... very very impressive Montayva.
The story is strong and exentric. And even the end is... uhm... unexpected but very good.
OK there are some things in it which are... well not my style. But I think that your story is still in the draft style.

Btw you got a PM
 

Ragewolf

Unblooded
That was a very entertaining read so far. Definitely an unexpected interesting ending... Felt to me like a mixture of The Hunger Games with Predators thrown in as far as the whole survival thing goes. I'm interested to see how this develops.
 

Zentha 1

Unblooded
YOU get back to writing you * pokes with a stick*
Come on I wanna read something!
 
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MikaPred2

Young Blood
Just read all 13 chapters in a single go. Solid characterizations and plot. Enjoyed the implied humors and teasing. So full props!
 

City90pet

Hunter
Not a fan of romance with a yautja and ooman???......oh no! That's my Christmas wish!!!!!! I'm hoping Santa brings me the city hunter for Christmas!
 
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